Re-Entry
The Youtube series that followed my attempt to write a new screenplay and re-break into Hollywood.
Episode guide below.
Read the various drafts of ÆTHER
EPISODES
Episodes 1-3 - Getting into the Mindset
Jeff Willis talked about the 2020 spec market, living in LA vs. out of town, and the importance of writing with budget in mind
I started consuming some new resources (books, podcasts, etc) and reading a bunch of new scripts, and also started posting here. Shared some of that in this episode
Episode 2 - Writing & Truth Bombs w/ Screenwriter, Bob Saenz (EXTRACURRICULAR ACTIVITIES)
A screenwriter with 16 credits and a new book, Bob came on to talk about the mindset it takes to succeed as a screenwriter, how he approaches the business end of things, and why most of the "rules" don't matter
For my part, I was still focused on catching up on how screenwriting had changed in the past six years -- reading Bob's new book, reading scripts, listening to podcasts. I also started thinking about how I wanted to "brand" myself as a writer
Episode 3 - Be Relentless w/ Director & VFX Phenom, Clint Jones (Rocket Jump; Corridor Digital)
Clint talked about the importance of discipline and mindset, how to avoid blowing up a budget, as well as the types of scripts that interest him as a director
He also put together an insane head explosion effect for my intro -- so awesome!
I spent one last week getting my head in the right place, catching up on the screenwriting world. I talked about the POWERlist that I stole from Andy Frisella a couple years ago -- this is the method I use to stay disciplined and stay on track
Episodes 4-5 - Generating Ideas
I spent a week generating 10 movie ideas per day. Pretty cool exercise
Malcolm had me pitch him a couple of my half-baked ideas and gives me the hard truth. This episode resulted in a pretty big course correction -- I absolutely wouldn't have written the script I just wrote if it wasn't for this conversation
Ben and Jake talked about how they take an idea and flesh it out into a story. They also talked about what makes an idea exciting to them and how that plays into the business side of things. This conversation encouraged me to double-down on the new direction I was taking and go a little "bigger" with my new idea
I did one-pagers on a few ideas, then settled on the idea that eventually became ÆTHER. I started digging into that, gathering research resources, working on my "scratch document," and making a list of scripts to read and movies to watch
I showed some of my actual writing process on the "scratch doc"
Episodes 6-8 - Outlining
Episode 6 - Outlines & Hollywood Lies w/ Screenwriter, Joe Johnson (DON'T HANG UP; DARE ME)
Joe shared thoughts on outlining, voice, being "good in a room," and the greatest lie ever told in Hollywood
I kept working on my scratch doc, studied more movie structure, and dug deep into research
Martin dug into his outlining process, movie structure, and the overall art of screenwriting
I started my actual outline and show the one-pager process I used to kick that off, kept going hard with research
The positivity episode! Dalan chatted about the highs and lows of a writing career, outlining, why he doesn't read his reviews, and the importance of having fun through it all
I did a screen capture of my own outlining process and ultimately finished my outline this week
Episodes 9-13 - The Rough Draft
Ryan talked about "voice," the importance of actually having something to say, and how he approaches the early pages of his scripts
I wrote FADE IN (or my version of that) for the first time in years and did a screen capture of me writing the first few (very rough) paragraphs of ÆTHER
Erica and Hannah spoke about how they build empathy, how to build a great first act, and thoughts on writing better female characters (important for me to hear, since ÆTHER centers around two of them)
I did a screen-capture of me writing a dialogue-heavy scene
Dan talked about pitching, how to work through the early pages of Act Two, and insights gained from his recent work on CHURCH OF SPIES w/ director Philip Noyce.
This was a big help since I had struggled a bit from pages 35-50 or so
Malcolm came back to talk about the second half of Act Two, the perils of writing to page count, and defining characters through trauma and urgency.
He seriously challenged me with my characters and it was exactly what I needed to hear
Charley and Vlas dug into how they craft their stories and endings, how they work through notes, the state of the business with COVID, and much, much more
I finished that rough draft! Did a quick screen capture to commemorate it
Episodes 14-25 - Rewriting and Breaking In
As my processed veered from the plan a little, so did the episodes. Below you’ll find episodes about rewriting, breaking in, getting movies made, and two episodes where pro writers gave me notes on my drafts.
Episode 14 - Puke Drafts & Action Scenes w/ Screenwriter, Matt Altman (ATHENA)
Matt spoke about how he writes action scenes, his willingness to throw out draft after draft to get it right, and what it took to get into the WGA
I happily took a week off of working on the script and instead put some time into a short story
Episode 15 - Hollywood Careers from Afar w/ Screenwriter, Matias Caruso (MAYHEM)
Matias spoke about how he became a produced, WGA screenwriter from his home in Argentina, where he still lives and works today
Jeff, Kristy, and Christie gave me amazing, thoughtful notes on my first draft. They weren’t easy to hear, but they were just what I needed
Episode 17 - Rewrites & Tracking the Reader w/ Screenwriter, Kristy Lowrey (FBI, 12 MONKEYS)
Kristy dug deep into her rewrite process, how she tracks the reader, and how she manipulates emotions with her words
I got started on the second draft of ÆTHER — a page one rewrite
Jay and Chris Thornton spoke about their approach to storytelling, their experiences in Hollywood, and why they chose to go and make their own micro-budget film
I continued to plug away at the rewrite — and found it harder than expected. Started getting behind pace for the first time in the series
Episode 19 - Re-Breaking In & Parallel Development w/ Screenwriter, James Simpson (ARMORED)
James spoke about his own experience with re-breaking in, working with reps, and parallel development
I continued to be behind pace in my rewrite, but CACTUS JACK was released. My first movie as a producer, this was an exciting time and a pretty reasonable excuse as far as distractions go
Adam spoke at length about how he broke in and how he persevered through the many years and scripts it took to become a produced writer
Still behind pace, I chose to take a break for a couple weeks after this so I could buckle down on the actual screenplay
Shawn and Michael spoke about their Hollywood successes, as well as how they took control of their careers by making their own micro and low-budget films
I finished the second draft of ÆTHER and sent it out to readers. Also, Clint Jones and made the decision to join forces to make a new movie, with me writing, both of us producing and Clint directing. Additionally, I connected with another director who I hope to work with on another project
Episode 22 - Thoughts On Having Just Broken In w/ Screenwriter, Manfred Lopez Grem
Manfred spoke about the path that took him to where he is today — a brand new WGA screenwriter with a mid-six-figure deal under his belt and others in the works!
I used the time away from ÆTHER to focus on my other projects
Episode 23 - Find Your Own Way into Hollywood w/ Jeff Willis, Jay Thornton, and Mike Morin
Mike, Jay, and Jeff spoke about their unique approaches to screenwriting and getting movies made. They gave some great advice on how writers can advocate for and protect themselves
I got most of my notes back on ÆTHER and was stoked to discover that people really liked this draft
Episode 24 - 2nd Draft Notes: Theme & Endings w/ The Thornton Brothers and Adam Taylor Barker
Jay, Chris, and Adam gave me some amazing advice on how I could draw out my themes to strengthen my ending
Episode 25 - Query Letters to Managers and Polishing Final Drafts
No interview in this one! Instead, I did a bunch of screen capture, showing the rewrite process of my final draft and how I approach querying